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General Advice
Paper Mechanics
Strategies for Good Writing

Thesis
General Advice
Having a clear thesis
3 tests for a good thesis

Argument
Paragraph Structure
Topic Sentences
Strong Arguments
Checking your arguments
Before your final draft
Effective conclusions

Evidence
Handling Evidence
Quotation Format

Writing skills
Clarity
Grammatical Errors
The literary present
Sentence Fragments
The use of "I"
Word choice

Avoiding Sentence Fragments

A sentence must include both a subject and a predicate. The subject is based on a noun or pronoun; the predicate is based on a verb that describes what the noun or pronoun does or has done to it:

Helen [subject] opened [predicate] the book.

A sentence may evolve a great many complexities, but the basic structure will still be visible:

Helen [subject], a victim of morbid curiosity, tore open [predicate] the book and recoiled in horror from what she saw.

A sentence fragment lacks a subject, a predicate, or both:

Went on to become a political leader. (no subject)

Plato, the eminent Greek philosopher. (no predicate)

While traveling to Sparta.

The last example is not promising as either subject or predicate; "traveling" is a verb form, but it can't function as a verb because it cannot, by itself, express the action performed by a subject: one would say, "He travels to Sparta," but not, "He traveling to Sparta."

A sentence fragment cannot stand alone and still express a complete and fully comprehensible thought. This is obvious in each of the three examples given above, but it is also true in the following case:

Because he had not been trained for the job.

If this statement were limited to "He had not been trained for the job," it would be a complete and correct sentence; it has a subject ("He") and a verb ("had been trained"). The "because," however, points to some other statement on which all of this depends; "because he had not been trained for the job" is in fact a dependent clause (see Handbook, pp. 26-28, 34-35) that can make sense only when something else is added:

He [subject] failed [predicate] because he had not been trained for the job.

There are only a few situations in which sentence fragments may properly be used. They are sometimes effective in providing special emphasis--

There was no one there. No one at all.

--or in giving brief answers to rhetorical questions:

Is this an intelligent decision? Hardly.

(For other instances in which fragments may be used, see Handbook, pp. 34-39.)