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Humanities Grammar Handbook
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fragments 7 Run-on sentences 8 Verb agreement 13 Passive voice 15 ESL 17 Misplaced modifiers 18 Pronoun reference 20a Comparisons 21 Parallel construction 23 Commas 23d Sexist language 25/6 Semicolons & colons 29 Ellipsis 31 Brackets 35 Apostrophes 36 Abbreviations 37 Underlining 39 Numbers 41b Slang 41e Jargon 41f Pretentious language 42c Idioms 42e Clichés 43a Fluff |
43a Fluff
Your paper will be measured not by how many words you uses but by how well
you construct and defend a thesis. Excessive verbiage or extraneous information
helps pad your paper and get you to bed earlier, but doesn't add to your argument
or improve your grade.
Fluff: Penelope, daughter of Ikarios, preserved her chastity until such time as Odysseus returned from his long and varied voyages at sea.
Revised sample: Penelope preserved her chastity until Odysseus returned from his long sea voyage.